In this contemptuous rant, Bblake, a college student from Fredericksburg Texas, tried to express his notion of corruption within our Democracy. The article, Blog #7 Is the US government corrupt?, lacked well defined examples of past or current corruption cases. Any time the word “Corruption” is mentioned it automatically catches attention; however, my attention was lost while reading this article.
Bblake provides the proper definition of corruption at the beginning but following the definition he mentions that “our governments biggest downfall is promising all these certain things, but never holding up there side of the bargain.” But yet, he fails to provide examples of active bribery. Instead he mentions that “Obama has promised to win the war, but he keeps sending more and more troops across sea.” How is this corruption? A president trying to win the war by sending more troops only indicates that he is indeed trying to win the war. How can a war be defeated without a proper sized army? This comment was irrelevant to the topic.
His Health Care Bill example lacked facts, it only showcased opinions. He claims “This new bill is going to give all the power to the strongest people, and screw over the ones that work hard for [their] money…” I was waiting for him to include a fact or anything to prove this argument. “If/when the health care bill is approved the wealthy are going to get [their] care first…” How? Where are the facts?
He feels that “government officials worry about themselves” and not citizens. He argues that the Justice Department shouldn’t have sued Arizona over its Immigration Law because it helps decrease “drug cartel[s] and any other crime that is going on.” He also mentions that “the only bad thing about this new law in Arizona is that corrupt law enforcement is going to racial profile.” Racial profiling is not a form of corruption but rather a civil rights violation. Instead, he could have indicated that law enforcements stationed within the US- Mexico border will more than likely accept bribes from drug cartels, increasing the chance of corruption within the border.
The conclusion failed to “conclude” his argument. It provided a rather irrelevant message, first by saying “I am tired of all the promises that we get by our government. If they held on to [their] promises, our country would be succeeding. Instead we are going into more and more debt...” How does this tie in with corruption? It doesn’t. Second, I feel that his only decent example of corruption should have been added to the body paragraph and not the conclusion.
Overall the message was lost with mere examples of broken “promises” rather than true examples of “bribery, extortion, embezzlement…criminal mischief, including drug cartel[s], money scams, and many other crimes.” Do I think the government is corrupt? I wouldn’t after reading this article
The 20,000 Leagues of Political Argument
Friday, August 13, 2010
Blog #7 Is the US government corrupt Review
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
319,000 Jobs
I feel strongly about having proper education readily available for the children who have the power, to control the future of our Country. The bill will grant $10 billion to local school districts in order to prevent teacher layoffs. This fund will lift so much weight off school districts who were downsizing staff but increasing class size. Around the nation teachers were probably dancing around their living room when they heard, that according to the Department of Education, 161,000 teaching jobs will be saved. Not only will this keep good educators in our classrooms but, our children will receive a proper education. When teacher layoffs occur the children suffer immensely. They don't receive the attention they need in order to succeed! The bill prevents states from using the funds for transportation, utilities, equipment and or renovations. With these and other limitations we don't have to worry about improper use of the funds. This will guarantee that the $10 billion dollars will be spent properly.
Keeping the children educated and our streets safe is what sets us apart from other nations. So when I read that police departments were also getting some help, I was ecstatic. I would hate for crime rates to go up because of enforcement division layoffs. I am an advocate for supporting our police departments. This bill provides the assistance they desperately needed.
The loopholes that assist big corporations ship jobs overseas will finally get closed. According to the bill, "Foreign tax payer abuse is among the IRS's top compliance concerns for large corporate taxpayers." If there aren't any incentives for having jobs overseas than corporations will finally stop scheming the IRS. With this said, the bill will save this nation money and it will keep jobs here. These jobs are necessary to help rebuild our economy.
Not only did the House pass this bill at the right time, it also answered a lot of prayers. With school starting in a few weeks, they will now be able to hire educators and prevent after-school programs from being shut down. Police departments will have enough law enforcement out on our streets keeping the public safe. "319,000 job" opportunities will help rebuild this desperate economy. Finally, the foreign tax credit abuse will reach the ending the IRS was hoping for.
Wednesday, August 4, 2010
"Don't Ask Don't Tell" Review
DADT was well defined at the beginning of the article. This quick punch of information was like jumping into a cold pool on a hot summer day, I was alert and ready for more.
He provided further information about the fact that it has "deprived the U.S. of nearly $200 million from its start until 2003." This shocking statistic supports his argument that the policy should be repealed due to the cost itself.
He further expresses his belief that the policy should be repealed by stating that DADT "discriminates against [LGBT] soldiers serving the military." The sentence following this statement lacks support, He reminds us that "our nation's history is scattered with discrimination..." If he mentioned a few examples regarding discrimination it would have supported his argument. It lacked concrete details, such as the beginning of militias and how Louisiana segregated theirs and etc.
The reference to Lt. Dan Choi in this post made the problem real. It supported Alex's argument that the policy is "senseless and just plain stupid." It makes no sense that the military would discharge an outstanding Lieutenant just because of his sexuality.
The question that should be asked is why aren't we as a whole fighting for their freedom? Soldiers are fighting for our freedom, so why can't they be freed from such discrimination? I agree that this policy should be repealed. There isn't a strong enough reasoning behind having such a policy.
This would have been a stronger argument if Alex included a reference backing up his beliefs. The Washington Post featured an article titled "Don't ask don't tell survey released," regarding this policy that would have taken his argument to a different level. The questions asked on the survey were enough to leave me pondering what idiot would take credit for writing such crap?
Friday, July 30, 2010
Many Shades of Brown
If you live in Arizona and happen to be a U.S. citizen who is Hispanic, I suggest you start wearing sunscreen. You might want to get rid of any clothes that suggest you are an illegal immigrant. Clothes that are splattered with paint, dirty clothes that might indicate you are a construction worker, and please resist from doing any yard work. Also, it wouldn't hurt to invest on voice lessons in order for you to sound more legal. Oh, and don't forget to dust off that ole' resume because your summer landscaping job, might land you in jail.
It's pathetic to see such a poorly written immigration law being passed. Not only is it implementing a police state but it's going against the immunities clause of the 14 Amendment, Sect 1 which states " No state shall make or enforce any law which shall abridge the privileges or immunities of citizens of the United States." Just because Arizona is a border state, does that mean that the civil rights of Arizona citizens have to be violated, for the sake of the immigration law?
According to the document, "S.B. 1070 pursues only one goal -"attrition"-..." Attrition of what? Our civil rights?
This is a problem, U.S. citizens should not have to worry about being victims of routine stops. SB 1070 "...[requires], whenever practicable, the determination of immigration status during any lawful stop by the police where there is "reasonable suspicion." This indicates that at any time a cop may pull an Arizona citizen over, under the speculation that they look reasonably suspicious.
Where has the DHS been during these past few years? This problem did not erupt overnight. It has been a consistent issue facing our border states for years. They should have enforced strict policies in the past. Companies have been hiring illegal immigrants to work here in the U.S. under the "don't ask, don't tell," policy. So why aren't those companies fined for supporting this issue?
There were a lot of contributing factors to this problem and our only solution is some ridiculous immigration law.
Tuesday, July 27, 2010
Off With Their Heads!
Hugh highlights the fact that the "Republican candidates now hold a 10-point lead over the Democrats on the generic Congressional ballot." By making his argument comprehensible, he concludes that most prefer the Republican candidate. Explaining to the reader that "the Democrats refuse to extend the Bush tax cuts, refuse to fix the death tax which will skyrocket at the end of the year without action, and refuse to address the wild spending which has driven the deficit to levels that risk a fiscal stroke."
Hugh provides further information as to why the Democrats are digging themselves further and further down a pit by exploiting that they will "...advantage themselves in elections via the so-called "DISCLOSE Act," which happens to be a "partisan ploy." According to his article "most voters just laugh at the shamelessness of the ploy."
This article leads me to speculate that Hugh, himself, is one of the voters who is "laughing at this shameless ploy". Never once does he exploit any of the GOP's "ploy[s]", making them seem like saints. However, this very biased argument had some concrete facts. Hugh smeared my positive thoughts about the Democratic party with his Republican rant. I have foreseen the future that he wanted me to see. I will have to look into this matter a little deeper than I anticipated.
I don't necessarily agree that "all together the Democrats are not merely headed towards a political cliff, they are sprinting towards it." I do think that it shall be something to keep an eye on. But in the mean time, the Republicans can put their guillotine away, because in politics you just never know what could happen.
Hugh Hewitt is professor, lawyer and broadcast journalist. His blog is "amongst the most visited political blogs in the U.S."
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
Lucky Number Seven
The problem being that Republican senators need to opt their tight panties for some loose boxer briefs. They should "put the national interest above party politics." Which seems unlikely, considering they want to put labels on everything that doesn't support their unruly thoughts. It's fallacy to think that an energy bill is not needed in order to improve our independence from other countries.
This energy bill "[may begin] to end our oil addiction, we can shrink the piles of money we send to the worst regimes in the world, strengthen our dollar by keeping more at home, clean up our air, take away money from people who finance the mosques and madrassas that keep many Muslim youths backward, angry and anti-American and stimulate a whole new industry-". Nearly two-thirds of our oil comes from foreign sources. That's not necessary, and it wouldn't be if we had a plan to help reduce this co-dependence.
The Democrats need to fight back! Focusing on the correct word usage and highlighting key issues in order to convince Republicans to pass the energy bill. "Can you imagine how high the stock market would soar and how easy a compromise with Democrats would become if Republicans offered an energy policy consistent with their values and our interests?"